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Post by maxxxxxy on Jun 19, 2010 3:21:05 GMT -5
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Kylie
[/font] AGE[/font] 22 GENDER[/font] Female SEXUALITY[/font] whatever tickles Her fancy RACE[/font] Whisper keeper ORIGIN[/font] Ziel OCCUPATION[/font] Being a portal Kylie often delivers packages and messages for people simply because its easy for her. This is not something she does full time as she finds it is easy to simply “barrow” things from people if she needs them. She has actually paid a few people back. PERSONALITY (+)[/font] Supporting Friendly Helpful Acts happy when she isn’t- Even if she is upset at you she wont show it, unless maybe you really deserve it. PERSONALITY (-)[/font] Inertly lonely Dislikes humans- In a very raciest way. Being a human makes you already judged in her eyes. “barrows” things from people
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Post by LANCELOT-SAMA! on Jun 19, 2010 9:48:26 GMT -5
actually, you do have to PM me first when you want a canon, it says so in the 'claiming a canon' thread'. even if canons are only allowed now, you should follow what's instructed.
few things to fix:
- 'acts happy when she isn't', wouldn't that be a negative trait or something? i'm sorry it doesn't really make sense, maybe if you clear it up more it might make sense to be a positive trait.
- 'disliking humans' seem more of something that would in the dislikes section of the app. unless she's judgmental on races, that would make a bit more sense.
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Post by maxxxxxy on Jun 19, 2010 17:11:22 GMT -5
There uptated what was wrong. I hope that sorts things out.
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